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--- story:fall_of_the_alicorn [2020/02/04 11:34] – Kyle
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 ======Fall of the alicorn======
-[[story:start|Back to Stories]] - [[story:fall of the Alicorn draft|Kyle edit]]\\
+[[story:start|Back to Stories]] \\
-//Written by: //\\
+//Written by: // Samuel J\\
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+**This is a Re-Creation of the final session in the //Rise of Narkul// campaign. \\ The purpose of this script is to make the ending more dramatic and cinematic in a hope to capture the hard work and passion that the Dm and some players put into the story**
-Intro
+I wanna write something here...
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-Rumbeling of thunder rocked the stone walls of Dyndrud's lair as the storm above watched over the mountains. rain was coming down hard starting the pool down the tunnel that connected the town to the rest of Reton. the cool glow from the large gemstones that littered the town kept the cave well lit at all times of the day with the giant chandelier over head like a beacon of lost hope. \\
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+(Character Descriptions?)
+Rumbeling of thunder shook the stone walls of Dyndrud's lair, the storm above watched over the mountains. rain was pouring down hard starting to pool down the tunnel that connected the town to the rest of Reton. the cool glow from large gemstones that littered the town kept the cave well lit at all times. A giant chandelier over head like a beacon of lost hope. \\
 The citizens, a mix of Dragon born, tiflings, humans went about thier day with chores and work as the mass of Kobolds shuffled along the ground carrying out all manor of tasks and never seemed to stop. \\
- Jorgan was busy talking up one of the good looking tiflings as Dameritos scouted the town for interesting items. Ray was fascinated by all the Kobolds running around and the rest of the party were waiting nervously for Narkul's arrival. Ironhide was cleaning his equipment preparing to slay the litch once again. \\
+ Jorgan was busy talking up one of the good looking tiflings as Dameritos scouted the town for interesting items. Ray was fascinated by all the Kobolds running around and the rest of the party were waiting nervously for Narkul's arrival. Ironhide was cleaning his equipment preparing to slay the lich once again. \\
  Delta was over at the front of the vault playing a very broken card game with two guards. The air was calm but with an edge of danger. it was only a few minuets away from Narkul's scheduled arrival. Little did the party know that this was the beginning of the end.
-Entrance
-with a snap of thunder a figure seemed to apear in the flash of lightning at the end of the tunnel. walking in slowly. \\ Delta's ears twitched as she sniffed the air. \\
+with a snap of thunder, a figure appeared in the flash of lightning at the end of the tunnel. walking in slowly, Narkul had arrived. \\ Delta's ears twitched noticing a new sound. Raising her head she sniffed the air . \\
-"He's here" she said to herself as she put her cards down on the table. she stood up and stretched trying to get a baring on where the rest of her party was. before checking her sword and giving Remi a quick scritch. she say the figure in the distance from her position in front of the vault and started to head towards the center of town. The Rest of the Party quickly gathered around Ironhide to the right of the tunnel entrance. \\ As soon as Narkul got into the cave opening he shot two massive fireball spells into the tunnel behind him as the exploded in a ground shaking crack of fire and collapsed the entrance, sealing the only means of escape, Delta's ears lowered as the weight of her mistake took hold, Narkul was not here to talk. \\ The smell of smoke and Ash flooded into the cave area causing a number of citizens to cough violently as they all looked to the source of the spells. \\ at that moment the brass iris in the center of town opened up as the old man from bellow known as Dyndrud rose up from bellow, levitating silently through the air and placing himself directly opposite Narkul. His presence was somewhat intimidating, even more so then from Dameratos's and Deltas first introduction with him.
+"He's here" Delta said to herself as she put her cards down. Standing up Delta stretched and scanned the town, trying to get a baring on where the rest of her party was. before checking her sword and giving Remi a quick scritch. she say the figure in the distance from her position in front of the vault and started to head towards the center of town. The Rest of the Party quickly gathered around Ironhide to the right of the tunnel entrance. \\ As soon as Narkul got into the cave opening he shot two massive fireball spells into the tunnel behind him as the exploded in a ground shaking crack of fire and collapsed the entrance, sealing the only means of escape, Delta's ears lowered as the weight of her mistake took hold, Narkul was not here to talk. \\ The smell of smoke and Ash flooded into the cave area causing a number of citizens to cough violently as they all looked to the source of the spells. \\ at that moment the brass iris in the center of town opened up as the old man from bellow known as Dyndrud rose up from bellow, levitating silently through the air and placing himself directly opposite Narkul. His presence was somewhat intimidating, even more so then from Dameratos's and Deltas first introduction with him.
 Narkul pointed at to who he was addressing "Your holy plan is wasted and an insult to my existence and has no place in my kingdom, you and all your friends must be punished for your interference. and you, Demon, Defiling my body to satisfy your god, i assure you that there is only one god you should fear and that is i. you will suffer what you did to me ten fold, it will be slow i assure you." Narkul stood ready to purge the Fellowship from his Kingdom but a call from ironhide caught him off guard. \\
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 With the death of Ironhide at the hands of Delta the rest of the party fled the cavern
+*/