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 The Feat seemed impossible for her. a task much more situate to a sneakier individual. So Ravi went about owing a favor to NAME.
-With the blade wrapped up ready to hand over Ravi stood before //Narkul// as he spoke there seemed to be something different in his tone. Excitement? //"It has been so long since I have been able to wield my blade. You have proven farm more loyal and valuable then I thought possible by such a lower being."// \\
+With the blade wrapped up ready to hand over Ravi entered the tent, Passing the guards and stood before //Narkul//. The tent was well lit by candles and lightly furnished with carpet, a desk and chair. As he spoke there seemed to be something different in his tone. Excitement? //"It has been so long since I have been able to wield my blade. You have proven farm more loyal and valuable then I thought possible by such a lower being."// \\
 The blade outstretched but just before he could grab it Remi squawked and Ravi pulled it back. "//Wait, Before I reunite you two I want something in return for this."// \\
-There eyes meet for a long pause before Narkul bellows a hearty laughter. //"The sword lives to its name, Not ever given without giving something in return. And here I was thinking you had finally learned your place yet your stubbornly strong will prevails. even going so bold as to deny me what is rightfully mine!"// Narkul steps forward, imposing his presence over Ravi. //"Then speak! at least let me hear what request has made you so rash."//
+Thier eyes meet for a long pause before Narkul bellows a hearty laughter. //"The sword lives to its name, Not ever given without giving something in return. And here I was thinking you had finally learned your place yet your stubbornly strong will prevails. even going so bold as to deny me what is rightfully mine!"// Narkul steps forward, imposing his presence over Ravi. //"Then speak! at least let me hear what request has made you so rash."//
 Ravi stood unflinching, Remi perched on her shoulder fluffed up ready to strike, Fire in their eyes. //"I wanna see [[character:ironhide|Sindri]]."// \\