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 The hunters quickly changed their tune after seeing the creature they were trying to hunt as well as the rider upon its back. Understanding this was no mere wild game to be their lunch. \\
 It was not a clear convocation at first. The hunters spoke a language Ravi did not know. It seemed to be [[culture:languages|Primordial]], a complicated language used mainly by elemental beings and ancient creatures. Caught of guard at first but then it became clear why such a language would be used in an //Elemental Plane//. \\
-After a bit of bickering amongst the hunters Ravi spoke in common to them. \\ //"Hi there, I am a visitor, a Traveler looking for a place to rest."// \\
+After a bit of bickering amongst the hunters Ravi spoke in common to them. \\ //"Hi there, I am a visitor, a Traveller looking for a place to rest."// \\
 The hunters collectively went quiet then all turned to a single hunter towards the back of the boat. A large rustic man, twice the size of a normal person. a Cyclopes!. He coughed before speaking back to Ravi in common. \\
 //"Ah Apologies miss."// he removes his hat as a show of respect. //"We are but simple hunters on our trip. We did not know of your nature or the beast you fly. If you are a visitor looking for shelter you may come with us. Our village is not far."// \\
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-Flying alongside the hunting boat as it sailed through the sky leading the way. Ravi took the opportunity to gaze upon the ship and figure out how it was flying. It has sails but unlike a normal ship, They were smaller and o the sides while above was a giant balloon shape of sorts tied to the hull of the ship with thick rope. Several propellers were both pushing the ship forward as well as helping wit lift, Most interesting was that the Keel of the ship was coated in a strange purple crystal, similar to amethyst or opal yet it sone and shimmered abnormally, some sort of magical property but Ravi wasn't sure on the specifics.
+Flying alongside the hunting boat as it sailed through the sky leading the way. Ravi took the opportunity to gaze upon the ship and figure out how it was flying. It has sails but unlike a normal ship, They were smaller and o the sides while above was a giant balloon shape of sorts tied to the hull of the ship with thick rope. Several propellers were both pushing the ship forward as well as helping wit lift, Most interesting was that the Keel of the ship was coated in a strange purple crystal, similar to amethyst or opal yet it sone and shimmered abnormally, some sort of magical property but Ravi wasn't sure on the specifics. \\
+Aside from the abnormal mode of transport the ship behaved normally, Crew were going about their normal duties only slightly rearranged and the captain still gave the same orders.
 ====Chapter 4: Thunder Plate====