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--- character:livion:species [2023/02/16 17:10] – [Livion, Virus of the Cosmos] Cinder
+++ character:livion:species [2023/10/23 16:41] (current) – Cinder
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   ***Ability Score:** \\ Increase Intelligence score by 2 and Constitution Score by 1
+    ***Creature Type:** \\ Your classified as a Aberration.
   ***Lifespan:** \\ It’s unknown how long Astral born live or even if they age. Most born where time does not flow it’s safe to assume most simply ignore the ravages of time.
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   ***Languages:** \\ You can also communicate telepathically with a number of creatures up to your Intelligence score in a 60ft range. Livion's anatomy is incapable of producing recognizable speech, Roars, nips, moans and screams are her normal audible ways to communicate outside of telepathy.
-  ***Creature Sense:** \\ You can sense the presence of creatures with an intelligence of 7 or higher in a 1 mile radius. You know the direction they are as well as the number if there is a group. \\ If you focus on one presence for 10 minutes you can determine what the creatures intelligence score is, During this time you cannot pick up any other intelligent creatures.
+  ***Mind Sense:** \\ Livion is aware of the presence of creatures within 1 mile of her that have an Intelligence of 3 or higher. She knows the distance and direction of each creature, as well as the creature’s approximate Intelligence (within 3 points), regardless of physical barriers. Creatures under the effects of magic that protects the mind or protects from divination cannot be detected by Livion.
   ***Virus Incarnate:** \\ Personified infection you gain the following effects
-    *You are immune to Poison, Acid and Psychic.
+    *You are immune to Poison, and Acid.
     *You have a weakness to fire and cold damage.
     *You are immune to the poised & Disease condition
-    *You are classified as being diseased at all times, spells such as //Detect posion and disease// may be used to locate you.
+    *You are classified as being diseased at all times, spells such as //Detect poison and disease// may be used to locate you.
     *You are immune to the charmed or frightened condition.
     *You have disadvantage against saves made against planner shift effects such as the //Banishment// spell
-    *If your body is killed or destroyed you may reform after 2D20 Days in an area suitable infected. Double the ammount of days if the only suitible area is in another dimention.
+    *If your body is killed or destroyed you may reform after 2D20 Days in an area suitable infected. Double the amount of days if the only suitable area is in another dimension.
   ***Superb Magic Resistance:** \\ You have natural resistance to hostile magic effects you gain the following benefits.
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   * You Cannot be possessed or polymorphed against your will, This does not prevent attempts to, creatures that may try to possess you find themselves drowning in a sea of madness and lost souls infected by the virus.
-  ***Mind Blast:** \\ Livion can magically emits psychic energy in a 60-foot cone. Each creature in that area must succeed on a DC 19 Intelligence saving throw or take //Proficeny Bonus// D8 + DCModifier (6d8 + 14) psychic damage and be stunned for 1 minute. A creature can repeat the saving throw at the end of each of its turns, ending the effect on itself on a success. \\ You can use this feature a number of times equal to your proficency bonus, recovering all uses after a long rest. \\
+  ***Mind Blast:** \\ Livion can magically emits psychic energy in a 60-foot cone. Each creature in that area must succeed on a DC 19 Intelligence saving throw or take //Proficiency Bonus// D8 + DCModifier (6d8 + 14) psychic damage and be stunned for 1 minute. A creature can repeat the saving throw at the end of each of its turns, ending the effect on itself on a success. \\ You can use this feature a number of times equal to your proficiency bonus, recovering all uses after a long rest. \\
   ***Devour** \\ Livion can make a Melee Weapon Attack (d20+INT+PROF) On a Incapacitated/Paralyzed creature. \\ The creature hit by the attack takes 10d10+10 piercing damage((This Damage ignores resistance)). If this damage reduces the target to 0 hit points, You kill the target by devouring it whole.
-  ***Mind Lock** \\ as a free action You can cut your mind off from all hostile forces. Your intelligence is treated as 1 by all external creatures, spells or other forces that detect the intelligence of a creature. You gain the following benefits.
+  ***Mind Lock** \\ as a free action You can cut your mind off from all hostile forces. You become immune to psychic damage, any effect that would sense your emotions or read your thoughts, divination spells, and the charmed condition. examples as following
-    *you cannot be located by magical means, Scrying, locate person. Message spells or other telepathic abilities have no effect on you.
+    *Scrying, Message spells or similar, telepathic communication, Locate person.
-    *Likewise you cannot peform any of these skills or spells yourself. you still have full access to telekenetic abilities.
+    *Likewise you cannot perform any of these skills or spells yourself. you still have full access to telekinetic abilities.
-    *You are unable to attune to any magic items you may find, this effect cannot be nullified or removed.
+You are unable to attune to any magic items you may find, this effect cannot be nullified or removed.
-==== Background Feat: Grappler ====
-Source: Player's Handbook
-Prerequisite: Strength 13 or higher
-You've developed the skills necessary to hold your own in close-quarters grappling. You gain the following benefits:
-  *You have advantage on attack rolls against a creature you are grappling.
-  *You can use your action to try to pin a creature grappled by you. To do so, make another grapple check. If you succeed the creature is restrained until the grapple ends.