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 ======The Fall of Nabilhime====== ======The Fall of Nabilhime======
  
-[[story:start]]+[[story:valefor|Back to Stories]] - [[character:valefor|More About Zyllis]] \\ 
 +//Written by: Sammy //\\ 
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-A tale about how pushing to hard to fast will destroy everything. \\  +====Nabilhime Summery & History====
-The leaders of Nabilhime blinded by greed of their own accomplishments ignored the warnings and paid the price \\+
  
-The city of Nabilhime is nothing but ruins today and here we will learn exactly what happened. 
  
-CH1 What was Nabilhime like? 
  
-Nabilhime was always considered a place of war, Originally build as a fortress to defended the border of Oxtrad it eventually came to be a city during peace time. \\ its location in the mountains was the perfect strategist placement providing optimal cover for defence and attack. the mountains were too steep and hazardous to scale so the only way through was on the ground. \\ Nabilhime build houses for citizens outside the fortresses walls as well as dug into the mountains for their grand forge areas.+**Notable Warforged** \\
  
-The City was not only grand in stature, but also in design. The Master craftsmen were not Dwarves or Gnomes, their were instead Giants. \\ The mightiest of all mortal smiths you could hear the ring of the Giant's hammers all across the country when they worked. \\ The giants were worshiped by the citizens of Nabilhime. their likeness was carved into the city at every corner. statues in thier honour stood as tall as the giants themselves and the great gate to the fortress known as //Immovable Dharma// in The giant's tongue. the legends say that not even the gods could not break down the gate. \\ The Gate was guarded by Twin giant Warforged known as Gedon and Gora, one of the very first creations by the Giants of Nabilhime.+===Nabilhime Fortress===
  
-Nahilhime contributed 56% of Oxtrad's metal works and weapons during the years the forges were alight. \\ They Crafted some of the most powerful artifacts in the land as well as a whole new race of sentient beings known as warforged.+Nabilhime was always considered a place of war, Originally build as a fortress to defended the border of Oxtrad it eventually came to be a city during peace time but the very fact that it still stood meant that war was only ever just on the horizon. \\ its location in the mountains was the perfect strategist placement providing optimal cover for defence and attack. the mountains were too steep and hazardous to scale so the only way through was on the ground level. \\ Nabilhime built houses for citizens outside the fortresses walls as well as dug into the mountains for their grand forge areas.
  
-Chapter 2: Playing God+The City was not only grand in stature, but also in design. The Master craftsmen were not Dwarves or Gnomes, their were instead Giants. \\ The mightiest of all mortal smiths you could hear the ring of the Giant's hammers all across the country when they worked. \\ The giants were worshiped by the citizens of Nabilhime. their likeness was carved into the city at every corner. statues in thier honour stood as tall as the giants themselves and the great gate to the fortress known as //Immovable Dharma// in The giant's tongue. the legends say that not even the gods could break down the gate. \\ The Gate was guarded by Twin giant Warforged known as //Gedon// and //Gora//, one of the very first creations by the Giants of Nabilhime.
  
-Warforged, an entirely new sentient species created by the hands of mortals. Humanoid creatures that could think and feel like humans although were driven more by logic rather then desire. strong and resilient they were soldiers that didn't need pricy armor, sustenance or sleep, healed as fast as their creators could repair them and had a strong loyalty to the creators and the city of Nabilhime. \\ +Nahilhime contributed more then half of Oxtrad's metal works and weapons during the years the forges were alight. \\ They Crafted some of the most powerful artifacts in the land as well as whole new race of sentient beings known as warforged.
-This time ushered in a new age of power for Nabilhime and its leaders, with an army of almost indestructible soldiers Nabilhime started to become over confident, stepping over boundaries they wouldn't normally.+
  
-In secret the more humble giants took to crafting proper life rather then glorified soldiers, something that could think, desire and love, have a soul. \\ Special warforged crafted not of metal but magic. \\ Unicorn horn and Blood, powdered silver and Marble, mercury, Powdered mythrial and blood from a powerful Fey were the ingridients for these warforged. Powerful spells and alchemy were the tools and a Grand Gem was the catalyst, now all they needed was a soul, something they couldn't create. \\ 3 of these warforged were crafted each with a different type of gemstone at its core, A Topaz, an Emerald and a Amethyst.+===Birth of the New Warforged===
  
-Rather then forged like traditional metal then assembled these variant warforged were made rom the above mixture in liquid state the mixture was poured into a Child sized humanoid mold that contained a manufactured torso skeletonThe idea was that these warforged could also grownup like normal humans do so over the years they would become more like adults\\ then the large gem of choice was placed into the mixture socketing into the assembly and covered with more mixture. \\ The molds were then sealed air tight and placed into to forge to 'bake' \\ The life of this enchanted fire bound the mixture together completing the bodies for these variant warforged. \\ Once the baking was complete the molds were removed and left to cool where they now wait for a soul.+Warforged have been around for while at this point mainly known in the lands of Ostrov, But when the Fire Giants set out to craft their own they wanted to do things differentlyHumanoid creatures that could think and feel like humans although were driven more by logic rather then desirestrong and resilient they were soldiers that didn't need pricy armor, sustenance or sleep, healed as fast as they could be repair them and had a strong loyalty to the creators and the city of Nabilhime. \\ 
 +This time ushered in a new age of power for Nabilhime and its leaders, with an army of almost indestructible soldiers Nabilhime started to become over confident, stepping over boundaries they wouldn't normally. Bragging that it could easily take Oxtrad for itself and kick the King/Queen off the throne.
  
-Chapter 3: Stolen+In secret the more humble giants took to crafting proper life rather then glorified soldiers, something that could think, desire and love, have a soul. \\ Special warforged crafted not of metal but magic. \\ Unicorn horn and Blood, powdered silver and Marble, mercury, Powdered mythrial and blood from a powerful Fey were the ingridients for clay to mould into Warforged. Powerful spells and alchemy were the tools and a Grand Gem was the catalyst, now all they needed was a soul, something they couldn't create. \\ of these warforged were crafted each with a different type of gemstone at its core, A Topaz, an Emerald and a Amethyst.
  
-The Giants are panicked, one of their creations, the amythest warforged variant has been stolenAs these creatures were a secret there was no proper protection and now way the Giants could mention that such a powerful creature had been takenno to the citizens and not to their fellow kin. they could only hope. \\+Rather then forged like traditional metal these variant warforged were made from the above mixture in a liquid clay, the mixture was poured into a Child sized humanoid mold that contained a manufactured torso skeletonThe idea was that these warforged could also grownup like normal humans do so over the years they would become more like adults. \\ then the large gem of choice was placed into the clay socketing into the assembly and covered with more clay. \\ The molds were then sealed air tight and placed into to forge to 'bake' \\ The life of this enchanted fire bound the mixture togethercausing it to thicken and expand at an incredible rate, but the moulds were sealed so tight that instead the clay instead became far denser unable to expand completing the bodies for these variant warforged. \\ Once the baking was complete the molds were removed and left to cool where they now wait for a soul.
  
-A demon had managed to steal the amythyst warforged and bring it back to the overlords of the nine hells. the lords have been planning an escape for many decades now and were trying all manor of ways to get their armies out of hell and into Mor-thir. \\ Their latest experiment is to use one of these warforged to leave the 9 hells with a demon's soul possessing it and act as a sleeper agent. \\ The Lords of hell already had their sacrifice, a young male Demon by the name of Valefor, born to an infected mother he was detained and shammed, even though he showed no sign of the infection his mother had the lords were more punishing Livion, his mother for birthing children that were not pure. \\  
  
-A large ritual was created similar to a Lich's creation ritual however this was to remove the soul out of Valefor and place it in the warforged. \\ it was success and Valefore was able to freely leave the 9 hells however part of the Demon lord's plan was that Valefor would be under their controleven though he had a demon's souls Valefor was a new creature and was able to resist the Lord's commands. free but alone there was a strange guide, pulling him back to Nabelhime.+===Stolen=== 
 +In the dead of night demon managed to steal one of these special clay war forged from right under the fire Giants nosesBringing the husk back to hell for its masters as they requested\\
  
-Valefor spent his young years in the Royal City of "Nabelhime" an orphan with nothing to his name other then his powerful views on order and honor earned him favor with the king and queen of the land they took pity on Valefor and adopted him as their own to raise him along their own son the princeFrom this point on Valefor went by the name of Zyllis to signify he was no longer Demon but something more. \\ Zyllis became good friends with the prince and was well loved throughout the city, people felt safe with him, Even though he was young with the body of 12 year old Zyllis showed natural skill with a glaive he trained to become a Paladin with the giants and war captains. \\ 4 years of a simple perfect life but so easily a perfect life can get turned upside down.+4 Overlords of Hell had come together with one goal in mind, leave. The next idea on their list was to move a demon’s soul into a soulless construct, they had seen these special Warforged that the Giants seemed so proud of creating and implored to steal one for their own twisted plans. \\ With the husk now in their possession they needed a volunteer\\ one such fiend seemed to fit the bill, A Devil by the name of Valefor, a twisted fiend birthed from an infected brood mother yet seemed even more powerful and cruel then other demons in its ranks. Valefor’s lust for raw carnage and destruction was unmatched at the time. Less of cunning demon and more of a Devil driven insane by its own blood lustThe Overlords figured this would be the perfect way of both removing the loose cannon Valefor from their ranks and letting it loose in the mortal realm. It took many powerful demons to bring Valefor in for the ritual and even on the operation tablet it still screeched and wiped about violently trying to destroy everything living around it. \\ The ritual was similar to Lich dorm but instead of binding the soul to a phalactery it was bound to the warforged body. The Overlords wasted no time, as soon as the ritual was completed they tore open portal to the mortal realm and chucked the warforged body through. Watching how it would act. \\ To the Overlords rage the boy did not show any of the murderous rage that Valefor had. Instead it seemed.....human. Curiosity, wonder and fear.
  
 +=====The Fall Of Nabilhime=====
  
 +**Notes** \\
 +Zyllis adopted by Seril, Paladin captian of Nabilhime's soldiers, Taught, raised and trained under her for XXX years \\
 +Leaders getting to corupt and cocky. \\
 +Giants vanish in the night. \\
 +unsertenty breeds fear. \\
 +Fear is justified as the city is invaded. \\
  
 +===Rebirth===
 +The young warforged was just as a toddler. Barely able to walk on his own. The soul now harbouring altered its body with a single horn atop its head and a long thick lizard folk like tail. His skin a light ash grey completely void of features such as body hair, freckles or anything similar. Pure white hair made of the same substance as his body and deep purple eyes. A purple symbol etched into his chest where his heart would be. Naked and alone the boy struggled to get a sense of himself. All he could do was follow a quiet calling leading him to Nabilhime.
  
-Chapter 4: The watcher's Heretics+Valefor spent his young years in the Royal City of "Nabelhime" an orphan with nothing to his name other then his powerful views on order and honor earned him favor with the king and queen of the land they took pity on Valefor and adopted him as their own to raise him along their own son the prince. From this point on Valefor went by the name of Zyllis to signify he was no longer a Demon but something more. \\ Zyllis became good friends with the prince and was well loved throughout the city, people felt safe with him. 
 + 
 +Zyllis was put under the teachings of a lady by the name of Serial when he showed an interest in combat. Zyllis showed natural skill with pole arm type weapons despite his keenness for swords. \\ he trained to become a Paladin with Serial as his mentor. \\ years of a simple perfect life but so easily a perfect life can get turned upside down. 
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 +===Invasion===
  
 "Hurry Zyllis, We need to leave, now!” "Hurry Zyllis, We need to leave, now!”
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