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 ======The Fall of Nabilhime====== ======The Fall of Nabilhime======
  
-[[story:start]]+[[story:valefor|Back to Stories]] - [[character:valefor|More About Zyllis]] \\ 
 +//Written by: Sammy //\\ 
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-**This Story is under editing and amendments**+====Nabilhime Summery & History====
  
-The Fortress city of Nabilhime once was the pride of Oxtrad's Military and a shining beacon of their strength. \\ Located in the mountains on the Borders of Corvania and Oxtrad it was the first line of defence for the country. \\ Built by the fire giants themselves it was a pure testament to the way of smithing and an undoubtably force of immovable  for the country of Oxtrad and especially the nobels that lead the city. 
  
- But corruption leads to downfall. \\ + 
-The city of Nabilhime is nothing but ruins today. +**Notable Warforged** \\
  
 ===Nabilhime Fortress=== ===Nabilhime Fortress===
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 Nabilhime was always considered a place of war, Originally build as a fortress to defended the border of Oxtrad it eventually came to be a city during peace time but the very fact that it still stood meant that war was only ever just on the horizon. \\ its location in the mountains was the perfect strategist placement providing optimal cover for defence and attack. the mountains were too steep and hazardous to scale so the only way through was on the ground level. \\ Nabilhime built houses for citizens outside the fortresses walls as well as dug into the mountains for their grand forge areas. Nabilhime was always considered a place of war, Originally build as a fortress to defended the border of Oxtrad it eventually came to be a city during peace time but the very fact that it still stood meant that war was only ever just on the horizon. \\ its location in the mountains was the perfect strategist placement providing optimal cover for defence and attack. the mountains were too steep and hazardous to scale so the only way through was on the ground level. \\ Nabilhime built houses for citizens outside the fortresses walls as well as dug into the mountains for their grand forge areas.
  
-The City was not only grand in stature, but also in design. The Master craftsmen were not Dwarves or Gnomes, their were instead Giants. \\ The mightiest of all mortal smiths you could hear the ring of the Giant's hammers all across the country when they worked. \\ The giants were worshiped by the citizens of Nabilhime. their likeness was carved into the city at every corner. statues in thier honour stood as tall as the giants themselves and the great gate to the fortress known as //Immovable Dharma// in The giant's tongue. the legends say that not even the gods could break down the gate. \\ The Gate was guarded by Twin giant Warforged known as Gedon and Gora, one of the very first creations by the Giants of Nabilhime.+The City was not only grand in stature, but also in design. The Master craftsmen were not Dwarves or Gnomes, their were instead Giants. \\ The mightiest of all mortal smiths you could hear the ring of the Giant's hammers all across the country when they worked. \\ The giants were worshiped by the citizens of Nabilhime. their likeness was carved into the city at every corner. statues in thier honour stood as tall as the giants themselves and the great gate to the fortress known as //Immovable Dharma// in The giant's tongue. the legends say that not even the gods could break down the gate. \\ The Gate was guarded by Twin giant Warforged known as //Gedon// and //Gora//, one of the very first creations by the Giants of Nabilhime.
  
 Nahilhime contributed more then half of Oxtrad's metal works and weapons during the years the forges were alight. \\ They Crafted some of the most powerful artifacts in the land as well as a whole new race of sentient beings known as warforged. Nahilhime contributed more then half of Oxtrad's metal works and weapons during the years the forges were alight. \\ They Crafted some of the most powerful artifacts in the land as well as a whole new race of sentient beings known as warforged.
  
-===Birth of the Warforged===+===Birth of the New Warforged===
  
-Warforged, an entirely new sentient species created by the hands of the Fire Giants. Humanoid creatures that could think and feel like humans although were driven more by logic rather then desire. strong and resilient they were soldiers that didn't need pricy armor, sustenance or sleep, healed as fast as they could be repair them and had a strong loyalty to the creators and the city of Nabilhime. \\+Warforged have been around for a while at this point mainly known in the lands of Ostrov, But when the Fire Giants set out to craft their own they wanted to do things differently. Humanoid creatures that could think and feel like humans although were driven more by logic rather then desire. strong and resilient they were soldiers that didn't need pricy armor, sustenance or sleep, healed as fast as they could be repair them and had a strong loyalty to the creators and the city of Nabilhime. \\
 This time ushered in a new age of power for Nabilhime and its leaders, with an army of almost indestructible soldiers Nabilhime started to become over confident, stepping over boundaries they wouldn't normally. Bragging that it could easily take Oxtrad for itself and kick the King/Queen off the throne. This time ushered in a new age of power for Nabilhime and its leaders, with an army of almost indestructible soldiers Nabilhime started to become over confident, stepping over boundaries they wouldn't normally. Bragging that it could easily take Oxtrad for itself and kick the King/Queen off the throne.
  
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 4 Overlords of Hell had come together with one goal in mind, leave. The next idea on their list was to move a demon’s soul into a soulless construct, they had seen these special Warforged that the Giants seemed so proud of creating and implored to steal one for their own twisted plans. \\ With the husk now in their possession they needed a volunteer. \\ one such fiend seemed to fit the bill, A Devil by the name of Valefor, a twisted fiend birthed from an infected brood mother yet seemed even more powerful and cruel then other demons in its ranks. Valefor’s lust for raw carnage and destruction was unmatched at the time. Less of a cunning demon and more of a Devil driven insane by its own blood lust. The Overlords figured this would be the perfect way of both removing the loose cannon Valefor from their ranks and letting it loose in the mortal realm. It took many powerful demons to bring Valefor in for the ritual and even on the operation tablet it still screeched and wiped about violently trying to destroy everything living around it. \\ The ritual was similar to Lich dorm but instead of binding the soul to a phalactery it was bound to the warforged body. The Overlords wasted no time, as soon as the ritual was completed they tore open a portal to the mortal realm and chucked the warforged body through. Watching how it would act. \\ To the Overlords rage the boy did not show any of the murderous rage that Valefor had. Instead it seemed.....human. Curiosity, wonder and fear. 4 Overlords of Hell had come together with one goal in mind, leave. The next idea on their list was to move a demon’s soul into a soulless construct, they had seen these special Warforged that the Giants seemed so proud of creating and implored to steal one for their own twisted plans. \\ With the husk now in their possession they needed a volunteer. \\ one such fiend seemed to fit the bill, A Devil by the name of Valefor, a twisted fiend birthed from an infected brood mother yet seemed even more powerful and cruel then other demons in its ranks. Valefor’s lust for raw carnage and destruction was unmatched at the time. Less of a cunning demon and more of a Devil driven insane by its own blood lust. The Overlords figured this would be the perfect way of both removing the loose cannon Valefor from their ranks and letting it loose in the mortal realm. It took many powerful demons to bring Valefor in for the ritual and even on the operation tablet it still screeched and wiped about violently trying to destroy everything living around it. \\ The ritual was similar to Lich dorm but instead of binding the soul to a phalactery it was bound to the warforged body. The Overlords wasted no time, as soon as the ritual was completed they tore open a portal to the mortal realm and chucked the warforged body through. Watching how it would act. \\ To the Overlords rage the boy did not show any of the murderous rage that Valefor had. Instead it seemed.....human. Curiosity, wonder and fear.
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 +=====The Fall Of Nabilhime=====
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 +**Notes** \\
 +Zyllis adopted by Seril, Paladin captian of Nabilhime's soldiers, Taught, raised and trained under her for XXX years \\
 +Leaders getting to corupt and cocky. \\
 +Giants vanish in the night. \\
 +unsertenty breeds fear. \\
 +Fear is justified as the city is invaded. \\
 +
 +===Rebirth===
 +The young warforged was just as a toddler. Barely able to walk on his own. The soul now harbouring altered its body with a single horn atop its head and a long thick lizard folk like tail. His skin a light ash grey completely void of features such as body hair, freckles or anything similar. Pure white hair made of the same substance as his body and deep purple eyes. A purple symbol etched into his chest where his heart would be. Naked and alone the boy struggled to get a sense of himself. All he could do was follow a quiet calling leading him to Nabilhime.
  
 Valefor spent his young years in the Royal City of "Nabelhime" an orphan with nothing to his name other then his powerful views on order and honor earned him favor with the king and queen of the land they took pity on Valefor and adopted him as their own to raise him along their own son the prince. From this point on Valefor went by the name of Zyllis to signify he was no longer a Demon but something more. \\ Zyllis became good friends with the prince and was well loved throughout the city, people felt safe with him. Valefor spent his young years in the Royal City of "Nabelhime" an orphan with nothing to his name other then his powerful views on order and honor earned him favor with the king and queen of the land they took pity on Valefor and adopted him as their own to raise him along their own son the prince. From this point on Valefor went by the name of Zyllis to signify he was no longer a Demon but something more. \\ Zyllis became good friends with the prince and was well loved throughout the city, people felt safe with him.
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