Differences

This shows you the differences between two versions of the page.

--- story:workshop1 [2023/02/24 09:52] – [Oneshot: The Workshop Watches] Cinder
+++ story:workshop1 [2024/01/25 15:54] (current) – Cinder
@@ Line 2: / Line 2: @@
 [[story:start|Back to Stories]] \\
 //Written by: Cinder //\\
+**May or May not be Cannon**
+Year 12336
 There is a strange workshop of ancient magic hidden out in the swamps. a group of adventures have been tasked with investigating it. as there has been no contact from the workshop for some weeks they tell the party to take caution.
@@ Line 8: / Line 12: @@
 ==== Oneshot: The Workshop Watches ====
-After a few months of traveling from the edge of Corvania all the way to //Garmsby// in the north of Reton Raishin has been spending a few days rest within the town. the place was relaxed and it seemed not many troubles were afoot, there was a local city watch that seemed to handle all the daily issues rather than typical guards.
+After a few months of traveling from the edge of Covania all the way to //Garmsby// in the north of Reton Raishin has been spending a few days rest within the town. the place was relaxed and it seemed not many troubles were afoot, there was a local city watch that seemed to handle all the daily issues rather than typical guards.
 upon the 4th day Raishin approached the notice board looking for her next task, expecting to find another simple traveling merchant looking for extra muscle instead she finds a special task from a man by the name of //Larimar// upon seeing the hefty reward Raishin snatched the notice and went to the meeting place described upon the note.
-Sitting at the deck of a large well decorated house I whittled away at a piece of wood, taking notice of other adventures approaching. \\
+Sitting at the deck of a large well decorated house Raishin whittled away at a piece of wood, taking notice of other adventures approaching. \\
-One of the city watch, a very common looking man with an air of eldritch power. his name turned out to be Mahumaded Lee, I believe i had met him before, he had questioned my species, my horns must have given him cause for worry as tieflings were outlawed in these lands, i calmed his thoughts explaining that i was of Goliath blood, the horns are merely an inheritance from family above me.\\
+One of the city watch, a very common looking man with an air of eldritch power. his name turned out to be Mahumaded Lee, Raishin had met him before, he had questioned her species, her horns must have given him cause for worry as tieflings were outlawed in these lands, Raishin had calmed his thoughts explaining that she was of Goliath blood, the horns are merely an inheritance from family above her.\\
-A wood elf was next to approach, adjusting my mask and pulling back my hair gave me a better view of him. a traditional druid he seemed to be, I took a liking to him right away, people of the woods always struck a better social cord with me. He told me his name was Dayereth,....sounded traditional to me also.\\
+A wood elf was next to approach, adjusting her mask and pulling back her hair gave Raishin a better view of him. a traditional druid he seemed to be, Raishin took a liking to him right away, people of the woods always struck a better social cord with her. He told her his name was Dayereth,....sounded traditional also.\\
 I almost didn't notice the Kobold hurrying towards the house in a fluster, he looked strong but distracted, it was hard to imagine that such a small creature was a fighter but it wouldn't be honorable to brush away people just by their looks, i'll give anyone a chance to prove themselves. his name was Dekkas, or at least that's how he introduced himself along with two thumbs up and "Good Job", his hand barely the width of my thumb when we shook. \\
 Lastly was a high elf, he did not smell like any elf i had encountered but they seemed polite either way. w shook hands and their grasp was weak and flimsy, i felt like i would be able to crush it by accident, A cleric it seemed but didn't seem to gospel about their god much, unlike Dekkas who would not stop talking about his great dragon.
-We had all gathered and shortly after //Larimar// appeared from the main door, seeing him analyse us gave me the quick impression that he was the one who posted the job. \\ "Come, please come in" he gestured for us to follow. i let the others go in first as when i took note of the door it would be a bit of effort to squeeze through.
+We had all gathered and shortly after //Larimar// appeared from the main door, seeing him analyze us gave me the quick impression that he was the one who posted the job. \\ "Come, please come in" he gestured for us to follow. i let the others go in first as when i took note of the door it would be a bit of effort to squeeze through.
 The inside was well decorated and the brooms moved on their own, curious magic, i never dealt much with it myself unless it was an obstacle in my path. the party seemed just as interested. \\ upon entering the main lounge room my eyes are met with a great portrait of the the man himself, i couldn't help but scoff, maybe a bit too loudly as i got a dirty look from some of the other party members. \\ Lee approached the portrait and seemed to examine it closely but weather he actually knew a thing about art was up for debate. it was a simple bust up portrait. I noticed the elf took interest in the smaller art items around the room having about as much understanding as Lee. \\ Dekkas the kobold asked for some paper as we were asked to sit down. the chairs where not meant for my girth, as I sat I could hear the creaking of the wood crying out for mercy, and //Larima// seemed to cringe as if he was listening to a child scream, we locked eyes for a moment before he regained his composure.